Nicko ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-25
I loved reading this, so well penned. It flowed and was beautifully rhymed, It bouncing off the page at me!
Nicko
KayJayxxxRTVW ( F C D )
at 2009-12-30
You did a great job writing this amazing poem. Though, I think it is more of a Life/Nature poem. But either way, I wouldnt change a thing. The rhyme scheme along with the format was untouchable. 5/5
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