Comments - How did you sleep?

jlucson at 2009-12-09

Nice

Luanne ( F P C D ) at 2009-12-10

It is so hard to imagine my cyber baby girl growing up *wipes tear*
Only seems like yesterday you were spilling nail polish on your rug, and trying your hardest to find a way to get it off ... lol

Touching read A.I.D
Muahhhhhhh Momma loves ya

Kayla at 2009-12-11

This is going as one of my favorite
poems. It's very sweet. (:
Stop by my profile sometime. ^_^

-Kayla

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-12-11

Wonderfully written poem & very true that when you are with someone you can't sleep properly for ages not that I've witnessed this for awhile, perfect. 5/5, Em

Kelly Zuch at 2009-12-12

Omg this is amazing... good as job darl... this is just like how i feel atm bcoz my bf isnt here... when i went home to sleep i couldn't bcoz he wasnt there lol.... sad sad stuff lmao.. but that was a really good read...

Brittany ( P C ) at 2009-12-13

I loved it. I really did.

On Cupids Bad Side ( F C ) at 2009-12-15

So so good. Def one of my favorites.

Laurenf7 ( F P C D ) at 2010-01-02

This is amazing 5/5

Karl Wild ( F P C D ) at 2010-01-22

I love the description in your poem, especially the part about holding the pillow in hopes it will feel just like them. Can't imagine how many people have done something similar to that over the years. This reminds me of the song but I like your version haha 5/5 Nice work

cindyy ( F C D ) at 2010-06-27

Lovely, the first stanza, i loved it coz i can kinda relate :) ow man your poems just keep me coming back for more!! haha

Daniel Mulvany ( F P C D ) at 2010-08-10

Again, what a lucky guy. I don't think there are too many people who would read this who don't understand how different it feels to be alone in bed when for so long you've shared it with someone. It's a lonely feeling. Well put.

Daniel Mulvany ( F P C D ) at 2010-08-10

Again, what a lucky guy. I don't think there are too many people who would read this who don't understand how different it feels to be alone in bed when for so long you've shared it with someone. It's a lonely feeling. Well put.

TaraMarie ( F P C D ) at 2011-04-11

This is really good:) i can relate to this alot! yr very talented.

Ole Carsten ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-12

I say wauh, else I'm happy to have seen this poem

sidh swabhav ( C ) at 2012-06-27

Your those heavenly-love- moments can't be replaced by anything. But at least you were lucky that you got such moments. Your attachment for those moments is creating sorrow for you. "Attachment, not love, is the real killer.