Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-15
Congrats on moving to the next round of the contest. I loved this the first time I read it and still do. I am sure a woman you love would be honored to come and go with you. These are words I love to hear from the man I love. Well done.
PinkySwear ( F C D )
at 2009-12-15
Congrats on making it to round three.
This was a dynamic and powerful poem. A deserved win , congrats and good luck in the next one
Rainbow Dancing ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-15
Jimmy this was a great write :] you done good boy lol
I thought it was romantic, sweet and breathtaking. I agree with Sylvia a woman would love to hear these words from the man she loves :]
william mae ( F C )
at 2009-12-15
Good writting, very romantic poem, and a great story line. loved it.
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-16
A beautiful poem Jimmy:)
I gather from the message underneath your are in some kind of contest and from the comments that you won two rounds already? Lol, I think that is great!
Your poems are of good quality, boy. Even if you did not have this support system of a club, you would do fine. I see you get lots of "outside" comments and that is the true mark of success on here.
Come go with me, paradise awaits
in the forest of forever, where I love you
is real, a broken heart doesn't exist,
compassion links devotion.
^^
This was my favorite stanza, I can relate to it so well:)
Good luck on the contest, son. Keep developing your skills and send it to that adress I gave you and also: keep the best poems to yourself, it would be a pity to give it away for free on here.
God bless,
5/5 Ingrid
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-21
Jimmy,
I believe in you boy, and it's so nice to see I am not the only one:)
Have a fantabulous Christmas this year and congrats on this well deserved win.
God bless you, son.
Ingrid
PinkyPrincess ( F C )
at 2009-12-21
Aww.. beautiful! I love it! And congratulations...! My favorite part is the last stanza :) wonderful!
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-21
I wish I had the ability that you do to write such amazing poems. This one was absolutely beautiful & it must have left me so speechless the first time that I had not commented on it til today :] Uhm anyways, wonderful wonderful & congrats again!
Michael D Nalley TC ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-22
You surely deserved to win
I Am Ready To Climb ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-23
This was such a passionate write and a well-deserved win. The power in this poem still amazes me and it is rare that you come across these masterpieces, though it is starting to happen more often, with such excellent poets. I enjoyed reading your unique style, never give that up.
God bless you and Merry Christmas!
~MaryAnne
shobhana kumar ( F P C D )
at 2010-02-11
"Love a misty rain, replenishing scorched emotions" - this a fantastic way to describe the feeling.
brilliant write.
shobhana
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