I Am Ready To Climb ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-25
I really don't know how to describe this piece, it just took all words out of me. What I will say is that it was beautiful and if that word only could express and portray thousands of pictures, it would. I found myself caught up in the dance, and my heart filled with passion.
Keep up the stunning work!
God bless you and Merry Christmas to you!
~MaryAnne
EvanescentMoon ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-25
Oh God, it flows like a gentle breeze..A soul soothing piece that calms me in this cold dark night..What a wonderful feeling! This piece shows the depth and breadth of yout talent..
Luna Blue ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-26
Beautiful poem (or performance) you've written. I loved the way you involved the techniques of ballet, while not making this like a guidebook. And I have to agree with the previous comment, indeed a very good flow.
Though Swan Lake is something very famous in the world of ballet, I didn't expect this at all.
The vocabulary you possess makes this even more elegant, well done.
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-26
Just like the dance itself your words drew
beautiful pictures..very well penned!
Merry Christmas..take care :)
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-27
Samia,
I noticed you added a date to this, I feel it somehow connects to the meaning of this poem, although it could be just a coincidence and you have made a decision to include the actual date of birth of a poem from now on:)
I like the wording in this, the images that it made me see, but I also sense solitude and a tenacious spirit behind it all.
The swan lake is a beautiful ballet show, I have seen it many years ago and your words did do it justice.
Strive on, delicate one,
a transformation approaching
through the eyes of choreography
^^
Encouraging words....packed with so much deeper meaning.
God bless and best wishes for 2010,
5/5 Ingrid
Paul anand singh ( F C )
at 2009-12-27
Beautifully npenned indeed.Your usages of words adds a touch of class to this piece my friend.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...
Mysterious Charmer ( F C D )
at 2009-12-28
I can't say that I've seen this ballet show. But I have heard of it, and from what I've heard it's a beautiful show. Your wording here is beautiful, and I'm sure that you've done the show justice. Well done!
Take care,
Mysterious Charmer
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-28
Wow this was awesome, it was almost therapuetic, & relaxing to read. Your words are always so unique & interesting to read through. How beautiful , a very original piece. I really enjoyed it.
mello193 ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-29
Simply awesome, it used a lot of big complicated words haha...you should work on the structure of this though, great job
Anna Stephens ( F P C D )
at 2009-12-30
Beautifully done, my dear. I've told you before how much I love this piece.
Petals in the Wind ( F C )
at 2009-12-31
Such beauty in your words. The ballet, itself, I have only seen on TV but you have brought it to life for me. As melancholy as Odette herself...breathtaking!
Paul anand singh ( F C )
at 2010-01-03
Beautifully penned indeed.An enjoyable read.
Paul...
Nema ( F C D )
at 2010-01-03
Soso, it always takes me so much time to comprehend your poetry :D
This was beautiful. I don't know how you come up with these ideas, masha'allah girl you're amazing!
I admit I had to read the poem like 6 times to comment :D lol..
Well done babe.
Shine on~
Faithless ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-04
Wow, this poem is truly breath taking. Great words of choice, I agree with mouris, I get to learn new words every time I read your poem. You seem to always come up with something interesting & original. Excellent work.
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-04
Samia
Another poem of beauty you have penned. Excellent imagery. You have drawn the reader into your visions.
Take Care
Cindy
EvanescentMoon ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-04
Woot Woot!!!!!! Congrats Samia!!!XD
Ingrid de K ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-04
Congrats, girl-with-the-golden-pen :)
God bless,
Ingrid
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