Comments

william mae ( F C ) at 2010-01-29

Bravo my friend, I can't do this style of poetry, you do it oh so well though, loved it and was happy to see one posted, yummmmy,

Mysterious Charmer ( F C D ) at 2010-01-29

I still have yet to try this form, I guess I better get on that. Loved your word choices they were spot on. And I can't forget your title, definitely amazing! Awesome work!

Take care,
Mysterious Charmer

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2010-01-31

THis is an interesting form and the poem itself
sounds really nice. A sad write about love..
good job with the form :)

Kuro ( F P C D ) at 2010-02-10

For such a complex and strict form i think you did an outstanding job! nice job!
~Kuro

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