Ingrid de K ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-30
Katie,
Some lines in this poem are so relatable, to many people I guess.
When we have a good friend, sometimes the feeling changes and we fall in love..a risk, because when you fail to make it work, then you most probably will have lost the friendship too. But the heart cannot be told what to do. I think honestly is the best policy
in all cases and certaily in this case.
Good luck hun, good job on the poem:)
God bless and a big hug,
5/5 Ingrid
Mimed Lovette ( F P C D )
at 2010-01-30
Aww I loved this one! The ending was unexpected and quite a sweet surprise (:
Red love flows as the rift grows; your hand drops & deserts
^ ^ ^
love LOVE this sentence above, keep writing! 5/5 from me! XD
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