Comments - A fire lit show

Tara Kay ( F P C D ) at 2012-06-13

I am smiling from ear to ear, you wrote this piece marvellously, it was well done within the strict guidelines and flowed smoothly and captured the romance and imagery well too.

I loved this piece so much...
xxxx

Darren Connor ( F C D ) at 2012-06-13

Great little poem, like the concept of stars spelling romantic words. I guess you could look at a clear sky and make just about any word you would like to if you can see enough stars.
That makes this poem believable.
I like how flicker and lullabies work together.
Great job.

Hannah Lizette ( F P C D ) at 2012-06-13

This is beautiful, chelsey! describes the perfect summer night. the first stanza is my favorite! stars spelling romantic words and the air has a fever... amazing. :) 5/5

Everlasting ( F P C D ) at 2012-06-14

What I love about this piece is the scene.
It created a beautiful love place. The night and the sky, fireflies( lighting bugs) help to add a good imagery.

It was tranquil and it relax me when I read it. 5/5
I also loved the word choice. It's tough when we can only use certain number of words.
It's even more tougher than counting syllables

But you did it, well done.

Ms Happiness ( F C D ) at 2012-06-14

I really loved it too, great job Chels:)
And wooooohoooooo yes she did it, you did an awesome job:)

Purple Rose ( F C D ) at 2012-06-14

This is a very beautiful poem, Chelsey :) I like how you used all of the words that were required for the club contest and the insects that you used :) I love lightning bugs...so pretty at night where you can actually see them...

Beautiful poem.

Excellent
5/5

Poet on the Piano ( F P C D ) at 2012-06-15

This is so beautiful Chelsey, I loved how you had to write about an insect and include a season as well. It was very calming to read and your words flow into such a gorgeous scene, intimate between the two of you. Ebony is one of my favorite words, and I liked how you started the poem off with it to describe the night!

Absolutely beautiful- I feel like you chose the images and words so carefully like they were fragile, enjoyed reading this poem of yours!

Lioness ( F P C D ) at 2012-06-16

Chelsey I remember reading this one and thought that the imagery was awesome. I loved reading it.

We are in winter here in Australia so reading this poem kind of warmed me up which was nice!

Awesome write
x

Average thoughts ( F P C D ) at 2012-06-18

U wrote d guidelines in an excellent way.
And ya, lightning bugs r my fav too.
Actualy,it reminded me of my childhood..and hw i used to catch them..beautiful.and lvd ,hw u related it to romance.