Dagmar Wilson ( F P C D )
This is so beautiful Paul
it reminds me of a song "My girl"
Ms Happiness ( F C D )
I agree it is beautiful, good job Paul:)
CryingHeart ( F C )
5/5 i wish sm1 would say da sm for me :P
Everlasting ( F P C D )
This stanza was amazing so smooth and so believable
"She calms me down
with just her touch,
so gentle, it soothes
That's my favorite part, on the other two stanzas there were a few parts that tripped me off when I read them.
For instance by the creator himself-- the sound of it. I feel it doesn't go with the tone of the first stanza.
Nonetheless, I like this poem very much.
[ Praised by Paul Gondwe | Approved by Melpomene ]
Lioness ( F P C D )
I think this poem is beautiful and it is evident how you feel about this girl. It can be felt within every stanza.
Savannah is Crying ( F )
Very lovely. its a great poem 5/5
Owner of a Mended Heart ( F P C )