Mrs Rhyme ( F P C D )
Hehe, so cuuuuute, I loved it :-) it actually reminded me of one of my old poems ..
Maple Tree ( F P C D )
I love to read poems of childhood memories... to remember your first crush, puppy love... its the time of innocence and I really enjoyed this piece Squeaks!!
Hannah Lizette ( F P C D )
This is adorable, plain and simple.
It brings back memories of when I had my first puppy love, hanging out all day, teasing and picking on each other... times before love got complicated, hahaha.
Great poem :)
Purple Rose ( F C D )
This is so cute, Ben. I don't really have much to say about it, but it is very cute.
'In our hearts we'd have each other shelved
But what did we know, we were only twelve'
^ For some odd reason, I did not expect these two to be twelve years old. He he he...oops. I think that it is around this age that girls and boys start thinking that the opposite sex has cooties, or maybe it was before that...
I don't know. It is a very cute poem. It made me smile throughout the whole thing :)
Average thoughts ( F P C D )
Nw ..dis is what a perfct poem shud be..
It tuk me thr fr a moment..
I saw my innocent madness of age twelve..
Thanks fr sharing..
I really love it! i remember my 1st love
LoneSome Dove ( F P C )
This is so cute. :) I love it! I got chills thinking of my first boyfriend while reading this xD
So beautiful... takes me back to when i was young, and my first kiss.. great stuff. well done. xx