Comments - Your eyes

Karla ( F P C D ) at 2012-07-03

Lovely poem my friend.

Khalid ( F P C D ) at 2012-07-04

Thank you

Ingrid ( F P C D ) at 2012-07-04

It seems to me you love this woman very much Khalid:) She must have the most beautiful eyes ever!

However, as a fish swimming in a blue sea
for I can't survive living outside your eyes
^^
You can do without the "for"it is not needed.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid