Comments - Through Your Lips

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-05-09

Phil, I like this. It's sensual and your wording is quite unique. Never read anything like this before, it usually all soppy stuff.

You have a good way of words that explain the job at hand.

Em

Lyn of philippines at 2016-05-11

Wow ...

really good one.



lyn

Ben Pickard ( F C D ) at 2016-05-12

Hello Phill

As Em says, this is a sensual poem indeed but it is done with real delicacy and well placed wording.
It has an almost soothing quality to it which was a pleasure to read. Great stuff,

Ben