Comments - I probably said too much (rejigged)

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2016-05-18

Em, just lovely! Secret loves...my curiosity is piqued...

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-05-18

Thanks Brenda for your comments.

Phil Laws ( P ) at 2016-05-18

I like how you flow through details that aren't the same things that are often said. The only thing I can't empathize with is fearing the end. I find that even cycles don't repeat as much when you stop expecting them to. It's best to enjoy the ride without thinking a crash into happening.

-EDIT- I guess I misunderstood your meaning in a few lines. I like this version better. The new lines are clearer and seem to fit the thrust of the rest more cohesively.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-05-18

Rejigged hope you get my meaning now.

The Po whet ( F P C D ) at 2016-05-19

Lovely write Em, good to know you're finding that feeling of loving again.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-05-19

:)