Comments - If You (Diacope + Anaphora)

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-12

Hello gel,

I like this. It's short and rather sweet in an odd sort of way. The layout and repetition of words is pleasing and it left me almost humming along to it.

Take care,

Ben

Mr Darcy ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-12

Hello Gel,

Like Ben, I enjoy repetition. Like a refrain it hammers home a point. The fact the repetition rhymes emphasis it.

Well done,

Michael

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-12

Gel,

This is a unique piece and I haven't heard of those forms before so will have to research them and give it a go. I like the rhyming and the message.
Em

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-13

Hello Sir Ben, Sir Darcy and Pretty Em,

thank you for liking my piece actually guys you 3 are my biggest influence. .

Great day to all of you.

Gel

butterfly ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-17

You are amazing!! Ben has competition

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Oh no no no. . Sir Ben is one of my Idol here. . I'm also a fan.. Thank you if you see me like that. . lol

Gel