Comments - Nothing Less Than Divine

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Lustreless skies turn blue

^^

What a great line. I love the word 'lustreless'; highly underused, in my opinion.

Lovely write and a warm welcome to the site, by the way.

Take care,

Ben

Nicolette at 2016-09-18

Ah thank you. :) One of my favourites on this site happens to be yours, Anna Elizabeth May.

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Thank you, Nicolette.

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Oh Nicole, this is lovely... These lines standout

Say it one more time, show me all your love
Kiss me tender
Never surrender
You are the brightest star, there's none above
^^

butterfly in my stomach flew while reading this.
well done

Gel

Nicolette at 2016-09-18

Thanks a lot! I feel as though the last line could have been a lot better but I wasn't sure how as I couldn't find another sentence to finish with 10 syllables.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Nicolette, this is such a beautifully rhymed piece.

Welcome.
Em

Nicolette at 2016-09-18

Thank you again. :)