Comments - Delusions of a hopeless romantic

ether ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-23

The style of this is intriguing. Recycling the final word in each line to recreate a new sentence that flows on so well must be quite challenging, and you've pulled it off here. I love the content of the piece, too. Well written and original. 5/5

Victor at 2016-09-27

Thank you so much, I've only just started writing poetry as a regular hobby so your kind words are very much appreciated!

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-27

Hello victor and welcome to P&Qs

I have to agree completely with Ether as this is original and must be hard work recycling the words to recreate a brand new line that flows on so well but you mastered it.

Em

Everlasting ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-27

Nice loop poetry form. Nice voice and story.