Comments - Distant Dreams.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-23

Jenni, this is absolutely stunning yet sad all the same because though you're in love with this person you can't show it completely and love is meant to be shown. I can relate to this.

All the best, Em
Ps hope someone nominates this as I'm all out

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-23

Hi Jenni,

Em's right this is stunning.. and the feelings came out effortlessly .

I have just one suggestion in the last Stanza second line---->

"I have a dream where wishes come true,
and I can sleep safe (change safe into safely) in your arms as you"

that's all. But this is a nice peace

keep writing :)

Gel