Comments - Paint on Me

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-04

Hello Gel,

Lovely imagery here and beautifully laid out which makes the piece easy and pleasurable to read.

Take care,

Ben

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-04

Thank You Sir Ben for reading this. ..I love your mind...

Gel

Dean Kuch ( F C ) at 2016-10-05

You've managed to create a perfect poetic proclamation portraying pure, profound love, Gel.
The language you've used is eloquent, the feelings expressed--emotive.
Bravo, word weaver, well done...
~Dean Kuch

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-05

Hello Mr. Dean,

thanks for the comment and for reading this. .
By the way congratulations for the win. .

Gel

Dean Kuch ( F C ) at 2016-10-05

You've managed to create a perfect poetic proclamation portraying pure, profound love, Gel.
The language you've used is eloquent, the feelings expressed--emotive.
Bravo, word weaver, well done...
~Dean Kuch

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-06

Gel, this is a delicate piece and so unique that it pulls me in from start to finish.

Painted the world with someone is what I would like to do but I need to find that special someone.

All the best, Em

Autumn Breeze ( C D ) at 2016-10-08

Very nicely constructed with the nice flow of love. This is a different kind of write. Lot's of imaginary hidden inside which I am very expert to explore.

Nice work. I like the Author's footnote down there.

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-08

Thank you Augustus. lovey comment
footnotes are reminders...hahaha

TC,
Gel