Comments - Absolute Daydream

Kasie ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

This is sweet and beautifully written. Well done you two

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Thanks Kasie. ..it's really cool working with Em.

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Thanks Kasie. ..it's really cool working with Em.

Mr Darcy ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Ladies, does Ben. P know you're writing about him again? To be honest it makes my green eyes gleam...

No, you make my mind scream!

Good job and nicely presented. X

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Ladies, as Michael alludes to, this is clearly for me and all I can say is that I have ever had that effect on womankind world over, lol

Well done - a lovely piece

Em ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Gel, I enjoyed working with you on this and look forward to doing again in the future..

Now Michael/Ben.. What gave us away lol ;)

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Em,l I enjoyed working with you too..Thanks for asking. ... I'm happy to meet your expectation...haha lol. ..

Em ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

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deeplydesturbed ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Can i just say, of course the boys think this is about them... sorry Benny and Michael.. but its really about me. :P
We all know they both love me more! ;)

haha

girls - well done!! This is brilliant, flawless, the flow is excellent! I cant tell who did what (YAY!!!)
i love the layout!


Well done! its a 10/5 from me!

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Naomi,

hahhah. ..let the guys assume hahaha. ..you guess who did what. .lol....Thanks for the vote

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Ladies, wonderful write! This is such a sweet long distance love write. It flows like a song, well done-

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-11

Brenda thank you so much

Augustus Black ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-12

The thing that is making this write amazing is a very good slide of blissful rhyming. Very adorable, peaceful and honest write. 5/5

Nice job from both.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-12

Thanks everyone, means alot :)

ketaki ( C ) at 2017-01-16

Nice poem, wonderful imagination.

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-16

Thank You Ketaki

Marvellous ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-18

What a power shelled in two like minds! Wonder minds, like I always tell.. What manner of heart, you must have; for this very dear dream maker! Who believes finds Life possible.
+1!

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-18

Thank you Marvellous for that comment. .appreciated


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