Comments

Brooke at 2005-05-10

I give you a 5/5. It was very cute and very good-It's hard to believe its your first poem you've ever written, I hope to see more great ones comin from ya. love ya! mwa!
xoxo,
Brooke

Vannah at 2005-05-27

omg i cant believe this is the first poem uve ever written i think it deserves a perfect score because it is so heartfelt and...well jus great!!! keep up the good work and u should keep writing u hav a natural talent

LilFlaca at 2005-08-10

yo i give it a 4..but only cuz it was too long..lol..

liceldy at 2005-08-27

U just need to get spel check cuz dere was sum words i didnt understand. but besides dat its alright.

dana at 2005-12-05

I loved it.... one of my new favs.

rain at 2006-07-23

I luv ure poem ^^

HEATHER ( C ) at 2006-09-05

VERY GOOD 5/5.. ARE U STILL WITH HIM??? J/W

Haley ( F ) at 2006-11-14

So kewl! keep writin!

Franchesca at 2006-12-23

This poem discribes me and my boyfriend. i love it!

mecia at 2007-01-09

For that being your first poem i think you did very well.

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