Brooke
at 2005-05-10
I give you a 5/5. It was very cute and very good-It's hard to believe its your first poem you've ever written, I hope to see more great ones comin from ya. love ya! mwa!
xoxo,
Brooke
Vannah
at 2005-05-27
omg i cant believe this is the first poem uve ever written i think it deserves a perfect score because it is so heartfelt and...well jus great!!! keep up the good work and u should keep writing u hav a natural talent
LilFlaca
at 2005-08-10
yo i give it a 4..but only cuz it was too long..lol..
liceldy
at 2005-08-27
U just need to get spel check cuz dere was sum words i didnt understand. but besides dat its alright.
dana
at 2005-12-05
I loved it.... one of my new favs.
rain
at 2006-07-23
I luv ure poem ^^
Franchesca
at 2006-12-23
This poem discribes me and my boyfriend. i love it!
mecia
at 2007-01-09
For that being your first poem i think you did very well.
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