Amy* ( F P C )
OMG! That was so touching. I almost cried. lol Tyler, the gurl that end up with u is gona be so lucky! ur an amazing guy.
that is one of the most beautiful and sad oems i have ever read.. that was really good, shit is was great. i agree wit Amy i almost cried too.
wow...very touching, great poem...it's funny how we would give anything-even your life-for someone you love so they are happy and free- i would do the same
HOLLY ARMER ( F P C D )
That was breathtaking! I am in awe!! Very beautifully written!!!!!!
-Tyler- ( F C )
thank u for the comments :) means alot
Ann Marie ( F C D )
Wow! That was so heart-rending and beautiful!
Amy ( F P C )
Wonderful...so wonderful!! I loved that poem so much....I had tears in my eyes! You are such a wonderful poet...I love all your stuff!!!! Beautiful poem!
dat was hot....
Sw33ti3 ( F C )
That was an AMAZING poem you wrote there....it so sweet....thank u for sharing this with us and keep it up..
Richard Bottary ( F C )
Wow that was extremely touching. I really enjoyed it. I'd do the same thing for a girl I cared about as well.
-Tyler- ( F C )
Thank u for all the comments :)... this site has been screwing up for me way to much so im rarely on cuz i keep getting "This website is currently Unavaliable!" yea its weird...
But ima try to submit more
jess ( F P C )
awesome poem!!!! take care of yaself!!! keep writing gave it 5
This is a great poem! Well done
Jennifer A. Fox ( F P C D )
This is a VERY well written poem...It is the best one ever...I didnt think a poem could ever make me cry but this one did...It was sad...I loved it...Keep up the awesome wrote cuz you are truely one good writer...Chow for now...Jennie
Mortalidaga ( F P C D )
omg..thats so sweet...thats an amazing poem..<33 fantastic work ^_^ <33
Melissa Vipond ( F C )
This poem is so good. You're such a talented writer and so sweet. I gave it a 5 anyway.
OMG...WOW that was a REALLY great poem i dont know alot of guys that can write that good.. It was sad but at the same time VERY sweet! I give this a BIG 5...keep of the great work!
Alyssa Aka: lyssa ( F C )
that was a true hearted poem and i give thumbs up on it just becuase it was really good but the topic was even amazing.. end her cries is the best because no man should hit a gurl~ we aren't that strong.. we can't get that mad and make marks too... so good for u that u created a great poem it was amazing
Maybeth ( F P C )
hey gr8 poem . keep it up .. check out mine soemtime too
that was a bery good poem... i loved it...its its sad but soooo sweet...keep on writting...5 for this one!!!:)