Comments - Memories

David Munoz ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-13

Yes I know I have been pretty silent in the poetry department, but I hope everyone will at least give this poem a chance. Thanks in Advance to everyone who votes/comments.

Ashley Morris ( F C ) at 2004-09-13

Good job, David. I love reading your poetry. You are a good poet, keep up the good work. And I am sorry about the girl...She doesn't know what she's gonna miss out on. You are a great guy.

Your friend,
Ashley

Vivian Migdalia Leiva at 2004-09-13

I really enjoyed reading your poem for I too was done like that, if you were to read my poems you would see what Im sayin.

MAGGIE666 ( P ) at 2004-09-19

thats so sad it makes me think of what happened to me i said i would say i do someday then he went away but he came back and im keeping him


Amy ( F P C ) at 2004-09-19

Wonderful poem!!! I feel that EXACT way! Wonderful job!!

Amy

jelly at 2004-09-19

I'll give you a 5 for this one...its a really beautiful poem great job!

Hope ( D ) at 2004-09-19

I love the repetition of "the memory" and the consistent rhyme scheme. Those 2 techniques together make it easy to read and adds impact to your message. Great job :)

Charles Edinger at 2004-09-19

that was an awesome poem keep up your writing... i know how it is when someone leaves u with no reason... sucks.

daniel at 2004-09-19

great work keep it up!

Dane at 2004-09-19

Very nice, it is genuine

Daniel Lee Ward/ blackrosestarfi ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-22

wow, that is exactly how i feel about someone that means everything to me. i'm going to send her this, giving you credit of course. keep writing, and check out my poems and comment please.

BelovedGirl at 2004-09-26

ohh thats sad, if its true i am so sorry


writer girl ( F C D ) at 2005-07-15

wow...i can relate to that so well that its not even funny. great job, loved it alot. 5/5

-kk-

Lauren at 2005-07-15

what a great poem. I can relate oh too well. =)

Amanda ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-20

Thats an awful experience....I hope that you're okay! I know that loving someone even after they've left is an incredible pain! I do hope that you are okay David! I can't imagine being in you place, not again...5/5 though on an incredible poem...

mizzy at 2005-07-30

another great one imma add u to my fav.

Lost Soul 691 ( F P C D ) at 2006-02-28

Ppwerful write ... completely heartfelt. I've marked you so that I can go back and read more of your works.

Lost Soul 691 ( F P C D ) at 2006-02-28

Powerful, not ppwerful ... can't spell tonight!

Rebekah Dineen at 2007-05-01

Talk about speaking the heart for a majority through this one! Anyone who hasn't experienced this; your bessed.

Nice one. xo

Sasha ( C ) at 2007-05-05

Wow that was a great poem