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jamie25 ( C ) at 2004-09-21

very nice work! this poem flows along very well. you definately have a talent!

PAUL HEWSON ( F P C ) at 2004-09-21

im not really a love poem writter , most of my entries are in the sad catogry . however i do like to read love poems but there not many of those that would entice me to comment..
but this is pretty darn good . ive read it over a few times and i really like it ..
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