Comments

Dane at 2004-09-25

Well done, I like your style it's somehow different.

Svee at 2004-09-25

Definitely a poem for the reader. Yoo can reach me and it is a great feeling!

Liam ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-26

wow, that was good! ecspecially the last stanza! great work!

Robert ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-26

good imagary but abit choppy but a good read thanx for the response will look at your others ok

Sunshine ( P ) at 2004-09-26

Hey this is a really great poem. I would read more, but I just read this one for now because its late here and you mentioned it in the note to me. I will read more tomorrow when I am not so tired. Take Care! Nice writting! I will be adding more tomorrow! ~Sunshine~

Tracy ( P ) at 2004-09-26

aww i like it, im the one you said you like my poem and wanted me to read yours, yeah i can relate to this one, your very good and i think you should keep on writing too!!!!!!
Tracy

Ann *Stareyes* ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-27

A Great Poem! lol

Alysse ( F P C D ) at 2004-09-28

Awesome gurl!!

NJC ( F P ) at 2004-09-28

See noe i like that poem i can relate keep it up

Jaimie at 2004-10-05

i really like this poem and thank you for commenting on mine... keep up the good work!

Tristin Montgomery at 2004-10-05

Hello Sedusha

Wow you a wonderful gift at put your felling to words. I truly enjoy your work a look forward to reading more of it. Keep up to good work.

Love, Peace, Chicken Grease
ZIN

*Sedusha* ( F P C D ) at 2004-10-09

Thank you so much for coming to see this poem...I really appreciate it...Thanx again:)
God Bless...

~Love Sedusha~

Morgan ( F P C ) at 2004-10-10

hey sedusha. u commented on one of my poems and told me to read this one. its very beautiful. it feels like something that came out of my own heart. great job!

creasy ( F P C D ) at 2005-01-19

great poem!! keep it up!! thanks for the comment!! :)

Nikky at 2005-06-29

aawww that's SO ADORABLE!!!! and my gosh i can relate to that SO WELL. it's not even funny. NICE!!! you're an incredible poet! gosh i'm so jealous. haha - nikky -

Jason McDowell ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-25

beautiful poem, i really enjoyed this, take care, and I promise to read more soon.

sonam ( F C ) at 2005-08-11

thats a great poem, i really liked it.
keep up the good work.
this poem has made me relise something i should have done ages ago.
thakyou.

Tara ( F P C ) at 2005-10-03

Very nice poem, enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work!

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-29

Very nice, good job!!!

Shezy at 2005-11-03

Thas a Nice one Sedusha *5* on this one, Keep writing and have a great day. Adios and Cheers
Shezy