Comments - You Live in My Heart....

Grace © ( F C D ) at 2004-10-04

Wonderful poem Kumar! I really did love it so much! My favorite stanza was the last. I feel that way... especially "by loving, I have lost everything to you" Love is a crazy thing and you wrote about it very well! =) Keep it up my friend and take care! *Also thanks for the comments on my poems!

~Grace

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2004-10-05

wow! i know the feeling 5

Hope ( D ) at 2004-10-05

This poem captivated my attention because i am experiencing loss right now too. Your poem accurately described what i'm feeling too, but in a more poetic kind of way. Great job!!!

Lokesh Vashishth ( P ) at 2004-10-05

A very nice and heart touching poem.

Trincy ( F P C D ) at 2004-10-05

Oouch! That hurts.. Many lines were heart-touching ones..

"My love is not written....
..........comes its way"

"you still live...
....goodbyes"

"By loving...
...with you"

They were all great.


I read this in Sierra's Profile... Every story has a happy ending... IF your story hasn't end happily then thats not the end of it....

So dear, For all this devotion.. you will be rewarded oneday..

Take care, Love, Trincy.


megha ( F P C D ) at 2004-10-08

i just dont know what to say....
ure poems touched me so much i just have no words...


Eirisa ( F P C D ) at 2004-10-10

hi Kumar

WOW this poem was suberb! Seriously i loved it so much you have such a way words hun your truly a great poet...
Keep up the fantastic work...

Luv Eirisa xxo

Manchestas Angel at 2004-10-10

WOW!!! without a doubt....5!! beutifully written!!
"my love is not written on sand
for the waters to wash it away," ... OMG! how do u think of this stuf?? after reading this peom,i'l makesure i read more of your work!

Raye at 2004-10-10

very nice work

MeL JoY ( F C ) at 2004-11-13

great poem!!

Pooja ( F C D ) at 2007-04-29

Beautiful poem..very well written..great flow..i'l make sure i read more of ur works