Nicole
at 2004-10-09
whoa ! this poem is amazing, and i can really connect with it : ) great job!
EmmA ( F P C )
at 2004-10-10
absolutely awesome, I've never seen a poem on this subject so well written! keep up the good work.
Patrick
at 2005-03-17
Good stuff man.
Manipulated Child ( F C D )
at 2005-07-30
cyber. that's a really good topic, but I don't usually think about that. well thanks for commenting on my poem =D
Arch
at 2005-09-11
NICE!!!
ratchild666 ( F C )
at 2005-09-21
Aww. yet again i love this lol. keep it up. i look forward to readin more of ur poems.
Ana ( F C )
at 2005-10-08
I am actually in love with someone i met online, so this hits home with me! I loved it, its a great write. Its funny cuz i used to think that cyber loves were fake until i met the one. All i know is that everything happens for a reason. 5/5!
Ana*
Patrick
at 2005-10-30
Sweet man , I really dig it! And my girl luvs it! Clint
Missunderstood
at 2006-06-24
So i actually seen this poem on poemslovers site and you are number #1!!!! You are very good writer. My favourite poems are cyber because is how i met my husband. So i relate to them and totally understand what you mean. Its crazy but its so real, and its not fake when 2 people connect wothout touching etc. Its quite unbelievable. : ) You need to write in books lol you are so talented please keep it up , i wait to read more poems from you and will tell my friends all about you .
DoNT G3T TWiiZT3D iiN THiiZ GAM3 ( C )
at 2007-06-06
5/5 wow thiz poem waz really good...i been in luvz like that b4 and he ended up breaking my heart more than once newayz i loved yo poem...it waz well written and lots of pplz can really relate 2 it...keep writing cuz u are great at doing it
much luv
peachez
fionna
at 2007-06-30
Amazing poem really touching!!!
Surely Different
at 2007-08-06
This is an amazing poem. I love it, I really hope you keep writing :] <3 Cassy
blue angel
at 2007-10-09
The last stanza is a bit off but nevertheless its still amazing... cheers!
linda
at 2007-11-20
I love ur poem mostly the last part:
"When I look toward the melancholy light and see your on-line"
Morgan ( C )
at 2008-02-01
Great imagery of making a real feeling come out of a seemingly insignificant relationship with someone on a computer
ashley
at 2008-02-06
I love this poem hope to read more of ur writtings
Jodie Phillips ( F P C )
at 2008-02-12
This ia bloody brilliant poem love it love it love it wellll done...
anonymous lover ( F P C D )
at 2008-02-23
This is great.....and how i feel. wow.
MrPurple
at 2008-04-20
This is one of the poems I actually enjoyed, good job, keep up the good work
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