olivia ( F C D )
at 2004-10-25
realy sounds liek u lost someone u realy cared about .. maybe i tll werk out 4 u one day .. well written i know the feeling great werk
YadiYari ( F C )
at 2004-10-27
her gurl i love ur poems... but let me say one thing
At least u were w/ him an have all the nice memories... is better than me: that i loved him and i let him go... :)
*so keep doing ur thing cuz i know love will fine u againg! .....
HeavensProject
at 2004-10-27
nice flow of words
ThE cUtE kYlEe
at 2004-10-27
hey this one is me and my old guy again. i did the same thing you did, i fell too fast. and i still do love him no matter what he does. he broke up with me a couple months ago maybe we can talk about this sometime!! ~kylee
Naomi Ann
at 2004-10-28
I can totally relate to this poem. You write wtih alot of heart! Keep it up your poetry is beautiful!
Naomi Ann
addie
at 2004-11-04
i love your poems. they are so good. i love this one....and all the others
molly
at 2005-01-06
i can really relate to this poem also! this is a really good poem! keep up the good work! :)
molly
at 2005-01-06
i can really relate to this poem also! this is a really good poem! keep up the good work! :)
Kaylie
at 2005-10-24
Awww...cute
The Girl You Hate ( F P C )
at 2006-02-05
Wow thats really good! thanx 4 the comment!
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