sara ( F C )
at 2004-12-13
the words of your poem were extremely well written and the thoughts and emotions it conveyed were marvelous, just work on making it flow with syllable consistancy etc. wonderful job ^-^
Sw33ti3 ( F C )
at 2004-12-13
Hey Grl thx for da comment on ma bf's poem..he really appreciated it..u noe since its his first time wrting poems and it gave him more confidince..again thx and he wanted to say thx as well...ur poem was really passionit..i loved it a lot...ok well ill talk to u later..peace
*XoX Sw33ti3*
BlOnDeItDoWn
at 2004-12-13
that was such a good poem!!!i loved it those are my fav kind of poems(love) and ur doing a great job!!!
love always Jaime
Jessica
at 2004-12-13
wow that was a very nice poem and thank you for commenting on mine i really appreciate it but i am not sure if i will keep on writing because i dont think i was gifted with this talent but i will try to keep on going so please everyone check out my poems and comment them so yeah.....lol well anyways very nice and well written poem I LOVED IT well bye i have to go now
love always jess
Lauraballz ( F P C )
at 2004-12-14
I love this one :D Very nice use of words and language.
Thank you for commenting on my poem :)
Love always
Laura
xXx
Heather M Craig ( F P C D )
at 2004-12-14
AWW HOW SWEET. SUCH A GREAT WRITER U HOLD INSIDE OF U SMILES*
HEY AND THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT. THEY ALWAYS MEAN A LOT TO ME--AND AS FOR THAT POEM, YEAH I AM OVERWEIGHT BUT HEY I AM WONDERFUL INSIDE SO NO, I DONT CARE WHAT PPL THINK. THANKS AGAIN .LOVES
Christine
at 2004-12-14
Nice poem
Kenneth Gj0se
at 2004-12-15
Hey Sedusha!! :D I laughed at the mail you sendt me! 5 years old and stuff :P hehe, back to your poem! Really sweet and cute poem!! And might I ask who it is dedicated to? ;) ¤5¤ all the way ! :)
-Kenneth
♥Maybeth© ( F P C )
at 2004-12-15
OMG .. ! I loved this poem .. u did a really awesome job .. lol.. all ur poems seem to have the same heart and passion put into them and i think the talent u have is a gr8 one to have and u do an AWESOME JOB pouring ur feelings onto paper or should I say typin them into the keyboard. which ever. lol .. ! ! ! =D
Also, Thanks for ur comment on my poem, It was gr8 to read and thanks again
Maybeth ! ! =D
Love Ya, and ur Work !
*Victoria* ( F P C D )
at 2004-12-15
that was really sweet! i loved it. i agree with most of the people here. really beautifully written. that 'special someone' must be really lucky! take care:)
Ann*Stareyes* ( F P C D )
at 2004-12-15
Sedusha, Such a passionate and beautiful piece. Sound like how I feel for my special guy. lol
Alan
at 2004-12-17
wow..very good i liked it a lot :-) you do write such good poetry :-)
CinnamonTwirl ( F C D )
at 2005-03-08
beautiful poem, keep up the good work. 5's 2 u
ShAnNoN72
at 2005-09-14
Nice I Like it...
daisy
at 2006-02-21
I really like your poem you know most girls feel this way. But hey just to say you should keep on writing cuz you hav a lot to say!!!
A POETRY COMMUNITY
POEMS