♥Sedusha*Angel_Loving♥ ( F P C D )
at 2004-12-15
Awwww...this was touching & I loved the passion:) Awesome Job! Keep it up! God Bless!!! Check some of mine if you get the chance:) ~5/5~
~!~Angel Love Sedusha~!~
Ann*Stareyes* ( F P C D )
at 2004-12-15
Wow! So passionate and touching, a very beautiful poem... lol
kumar ( F P C )
at 2004-12-16
Wow...wonderful imagination...and u have written it so beautifully...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>
brin macnamara ( F P C D )
at 2004-12-16
Dear me, I adore this poem. Its so romantic-my sort of poem. Your imagination and choice of words are 1st class. Luv it.
Screenager
at 2004-12-22
Wonderful!!
merry x-mas!!
-Screenager
Allen ( F C D )
at 2004-12-25
awwwwww, that's such a sweet and romantic poem :) I love it totally :) haven't read something like this for a long while, that one really touched me, oh its great :) thanks for sharing your work with us :) take care.
pinkalias ( F C D )
at 2004-12-29
I really liked this. I found it very romancitc and beautifully descriptive. I love how you detailed the imageries and symbols, and I also really admrie your word choice. the vocabulary really added a hightened effect to the peice, and I espeically admired the lines,
"Under the moonlit sky
Festooned with stars"
I thought those were really lovely. Well done
james thomson ( F P C )
at 2005-01-09
awwww so sweeet poem
so wonderfully written in a deeper meaning manner
loved it very much
gave you a 5 for that
take care
cantchangeme ( F P C D )
at 2005-01-10
Hauntingly brilliant, I get amasing imagery in my head when i read this and they like i said are haunting yet brilliant
choihai
at 2005-01-18
heey,
what a cute poem very romantic :D
keep writingxxx me
Dark Savior ( F P C D )
at 2005-02-08
Love woven into words.
Simply put, the last magical act that is truely without any tricks or any illusions.
This was a wonderful poem and i enjoyed it a great deal.
Five/Five
◊ Atomic ◊ ( F C D )
at 2005-09-26
Somehow this poem mange to take me into a very different world of poetry. Its a good thing. =)
5/5
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