*Stareyes* ( F P C D )
at 2004-12-23
You've left me speechless, what more can I say. Absolutely beautiful. lol
Dustin
at 2004-12-23
Oddly, that probably strikes true for a lot of us. . . GREAT JOB!
Adriana
at 2004-12-24
awww tha is too cute i like it lots!
baby gurl ( F C )
at 2004-12-24
ok i will tell you one thing. wow. gr8t job. i really love it. u got a 5 from me!!!~
Taylor
at 2004-12-27
*hEy!! -thAt waS a gr8t poEm!! wOw ..I lOvEd it!!;) keEp *uP the gOoD wOrK!
Moriah
at 2004-12-27
i loved it
Brittany
at 2005-01-06
Beautiful poem! this is truly a piece of art!
comment on mine 2 plz
peter
at 2005-01-18
very very nice, i like it : )
rachel
at 2005-05-21
Well done
Nicole Santos
at 2007-07-18
I loved this poem i thought it was really great and you did a good job
lee
at 2007-09-15
That is great it is perfect
George
at 2007-11-09
Sadly I know how you feel.
It seems like this could fit under "desired love," but either way, good job.
Neil Marsden ( P C )
at 2008-01-20
Lets really hope he does, he could not wish for someone with more feeling!
Well written - Well done!
Neil.
Hustle Hard ( C )
at 2008-05-08
GREAT, GREAT JOBB!! 5/5
shaitorturedpoet ( C )
at 2009-08-22
I want our lips to touch,
And our hands to hold.
I want to feel your body,
Comfort me when i am cold.
i loved thats part.
good job
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