deadnalone ( F P C D )
at 2004-12-31
its good but ur summer ones are better, u shud write sum more like dat ;) :P
lol
take care
ellie
Sw33ti3 ( F C )
at 2004-12-31
That poem was really good and i enjoyed reading it...u have talent so keep it up and never stop writing..and thx for ur comment..much appreciated..
*XoX Sw33ti3*
Allen ( F C D )
at 2004-12-31
Good job dude, I can really relate to this piece :) I felt what you were saying... I think I was there a month ago... but yeah, anyway, great stuff, keep it up. Take care :)
Heather Clark ( F P C )
at 2005-01-01
sweet and unique>i like it!! *5*
bob shank ( F P C D )
at 2005-01-23
but what hurts most, I can't see you cause of fear
I can't fight my feelings so I'll let them grow,
This fear must die for me to live
this was very powerful, fear many times stops us from pursuing the things that make us the happiest, the fear of rejection, or pain, has defeated many a heart...very nice write and your emotions flowed really well....peace
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