great poem!!! its so beautiful. thats so sad. great job. keep up the great work. it was so beautiful and deserves a 5/5
Brooke ( F C D )
Very sad. I don't think I have ever read any of ur stuff before glad I ran across ur poems. Beautiful! Take Care!
*~*Soldier Lover*~* ( F P C D )
Wow..... very powerful.... it actually brought tears to my eyes.... awesome poem.... -5
misstress ( F C D )
Definitely a five!
every verse----------EXCELLENT, what can i say, no bad bits, keep up the good work, love annmarie
thats beautiful, and so emotional. you're very talented!! keep up the great work.
XღÜñ§€€ñ¯†€ª®§ ( F C D )
omg...that made me want to cry! You did a great job It was so touching. Excellent poem
great poem.. i felt the loss in it. tell your friend sorry for his loss
lisa x) ( F P C D )
omg...such...omg.....flipping speechless....such a nice/great/masterpeice......
i really loved this poem....WOW
this was really good. it was real but not cliche if you know what i mean. i really liked it. i would really appreciate you reading some of my poems. my newest is all over again, its the realest things ive ever written. id appreciate the comment. thanks <3
marianna ( F C )
WOW is all i can say!
thats awesome i love it! i had to wipe away a tear! no lie! great poem! =.(
Nema ( F C D )
aww!! what a lovely poem
it vroke my heart..really poor that guy
but hey keep ur work i also liked the rhyme!!
thats so sweet, great poem
vikki ( F C D )
5/5 as always
keep it up
This is the greatest poem i have evr read!!!
I had to sign up just to comment. this poem is excellent really really good. i couldnt read it all because its so emotional. excellent job keep at it !!!!!!!!!
Amanda ( F C )
Amazing poem i just found out that i have cancer and its been really tough for my man and i just pray for him that i can beat it so he doesnt have to go threw that 5/5
Tylor ( P )
Great poem! 5/5
That was touching and a bit sad