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Natalie84 ( F P C D ) at 2005-01-13

Beautiful....just beautiful!!!!

*Star~Eyes* ( F P C D ) at 2005-01-13

Bob, No one could have said it any better. True Love is greater than all the riches in the world. Beautiful poem. lol

jennifer ( F P C D ) at 2005-01-13

Sir bob, you have outdone yourself yet again absolutly beautiful and so very true. Keep sharing your amazing words with us...

Jennifer:)

Scooby ( F C D ) at 2005-01-13

ahhhh...AMAZING!

xHIDDENxPAINx ( F P C D ) at 2005-01-14

i've read this poem over and over again, tends to be one of my favorites by you!! God Bless
Love Heather.

lonelygirl at 2005-01-15

keep up the good work

Shadows Collide ( F C D ) at 2005-01-17

Incredible poem, definately gonna read some more of your work. I have to agree that writing expressively is beautifully calming

sinister ( F C ) at 2005-01-21

hey man great poem. liked it very much. and when it come to that gem i always endeavor to treat it right

Mortalidaga→© ( F P C D ) at 2005-01-23

Beautiful. Absolutely incredible. Wonderful job, Bob. <33 Loved it xx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Allen ( F P C ) at 2005-01-23

touching man...touching, Great work fella
take care
-Allen

Caleb ( F P C ) at 2005-01-29

Nice.

Kaitlin Kristina ( F P C D ) at 2005-01-30

This is a fantastic poem. I must compliment you on your rhyme schemes, in general, not just in this one. You have a fantastic way of appealing to the ear. Your rhymes hardly ever seem forced and they always have a great and easy flow. I love your writing, and I am not a person who is easily impressed where writing is concerned, so I commend you highly. Love your work.
Love Kaitlin Kristina

danii at 2005-01-30

wow! im totally in love with your poems the way they're intresting to read and yet educational at the same time. this one has the power to manipulate, in the way you have chose to use ur words it gives out an important message! i really like this one :)

alone in the dark ( F P C D ) at 2005-02-03

if you happen to find the rarest of gems
respect it, cradle it, cherish it and guard it

that was acutally my favorite part of hte poem because i understood it. i think the sware words and all didnt really fit the poem but nice job anyway

Serena ( P C ) at 2005-02-04

that is an amazing poem. u r really an outstanding writer. and you take from the truth. i agree, that love should b a gift of caring, not a gift of material as u said.

ciao,

*~Serena~*

»«¤ß詤»« ( F P C D ) at 2005-02-04

oh wow this is so true love shouldnt be bought it should be felt from the heart fantastic poem! 5/5
bec xXx

crystal ( C ) at 2005-02-07

all i can say is woooooowww!!!! this is such a beutiful poem! holy crap! i like it a lot! definitely a 5 and anyone who rates below that is crazy and doen't know what true poetry is! Also somebody said something about you having a website.....could i possibly get the address of it? i would be honored! LoVeS & PeAcEz
crystal

lyn_renae ( F P C D ) at 2005-02-16

excellent poem. again, your wisdom shows itself in your wonderful poetry. ciao~lyn

hunbun830 at 2005-03-03

WONDERFULLY SWEET!

**ShAdY** at 2005-03-14

I love this poem.It has strong meaning about the value of love, and not gold.
x0x0x0x0x SadE' DerieG


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