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Carrianna at 2005-01-28

Nice vocabulary

bob shank ( F P C D ) at 2005-01-28

I can't imagine a 15 year old being this talented, although I truly was a better writer when I was younger, I was no where near as good as this is, you have far more talent than your years suggest and I enjoyed this thoroughly...whomever gave it less than a 5 hasn't a clue......awaiting more from you....I hope you try different formats and structures as well....peace

Caleb ( F P C ) at 2005-01-30

I'm not writing for people to relate. I write my thoughts and emotions, not caring whether people know what I am talking about or not...

yasmin ( C D ) at 2005-02-06

yeah! so there! :)

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