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Fighter ( F P C D ) at 2005-03-12

awww such a sweet poem! nicely written. keep up the great work and welcome to the site!
Ariane
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bslocum21 ( F P C D ) at 2005-03-12

my type of peotry.. i liked it....

bslocum21 ( F P C D ) at 2005-03-12

im putting you in my favorites!! best poems i read today so far!!!

hunbun830 at 2005-03-14

I really enjoyed that poem very much. It had nice rhyme, a great flow, and good message as well. Very nicely done, 5!

Carmen ( F P C D ) at 2005-03-24

that's so beautiful! i loved it a lot! 5/5

Robert F ( F P C D ) at 2005-03-28

It's all right.Sorry I sort of stole your idea though...

snowy ( F P C D ) at 2009-12-11

Xcellent poem, very creative. I love how this piece just flow and the word choice...XP

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