Comments - Pretending it's not real

krystal ( P C ) at 2005-03-14

this is a really great poem i can relate ican relate 2 alot of theese poems on here

Amit ( F C ) at 2005-03-14

~ beautiful! v.v.nice, this one was amazing christina!
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

..:*Tessa*:.. at 2005-03-14

Christina, I really loved this poem, You're an awesome writer. 5/5!

..:*Tessa*:.. at 2005-03-14

Oh, and another thing. I have the same thing going on with a guy friend of mine. I really think you should tell him how you feel. I'm about to let my guy friend know because it hurts pretending I don't like him like that. So, if you tell him, which you should, good luck!

ღ.:Krissy:.ღ ( F C D ) at 2005-03-14

Amazing poem Christina! That was wonderful and amazing! I'll always be here for you if you ever need somebody to talk to. I know how you feel. I wuv you! <3

~Krissy

Hayley-(I LOVE SKYLAR) at 2005-03-14

Hey this poem is so good...mine are ok you can read em' if ya want! Keep It up!!

Nichole at 2005-03-14

LOVed it your really good at writing....all your poems are sooo good...FROM Nichole:):):) GOod luck at any other poems. but i sure they will be good anyway

Jackie Avila at 2005-03-14

nice poem it was really good..i gave it a 5/5 keep it up!


- lil mami

*erica* ( F P C ) at 2005-03-14

omg i love the poem its jus like what im goin thro now <3*

RainbowRachel ( F C D ) at 2005-03-14

I really love this poem. You wrote it so well, and I especially like the stanza
*This love is starting to hurt
Pretending it's not real
Trying to put it in the past
Refusing to reveal*
It's such a great ending to the poem and there's been so many time where I've felt like that about a guy. Nice work. If u have time, vote/comment on some of mine, thx!

Allison Taylor at 2005-03-15

Veeeeeeeryyy good. I love it. Don't hide your feelings. :oOo

Dare Id at 2005-03-15

Hey...this poem is too good and too realistic; you have been able to capture the reality that happens everyTIME,everyWHERE....Keep the good work...check my poems too

Dare Id at 2005-03-15

Hey...this poem is too good and too realistic; you have been able to capture the reality that happens everyTIME,everyWHERE....Keep the good work...check my poems too

Ashley at 2005-03-15

That poem really means alot to me, about a guy from work. We are suppose to be best friends but at times I'm not so sure, and yet I also have feelings for him but its like the more I try to hide it, the more it ends up showing...

Melissa Aka Melly ( F C ) at 2005-03-15

excellent poem

Dajana at 2005-03-15

Aww, that's what I'm going thru right now but I luv your poem! 5/5 great poem keep writing!

Donna at 2005-03-15

i can completely relate to this poem. it is like u knew how i was feeling. i showed my feelings to my m8 n it turned out he felt de same. we av now bin goin out for 9 weeks. well done. also im new on dis site, so if u get chance cud u av a look at sum of my poems plz !!

sinister ( F C ) at 2005-03-15

i think this has happened to alot of us right. meeting someone, jus being friends and then one day things start to change. and it does hurt when the love isnt returned

rosa at 2005-03-15

hey, this was a great poem, as many ppl have said i can also relate to this, so your definatly not alone on this one, very well written 5/5!! well done! keep it up!!
rosa xxx

Victim of Thought © at 2005-03-15

Incredible. You have much talent. I really like your flow, and your choice of words, let alone the emotion in the poem makes it worth a 5** You have my best reguards and keep writing!!
Sincerely,
Victim of Thought ©


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