Comments - The Last Poem She Wrote

Angela ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-29

Amit, I thought you posted this one already today. Well anyway.

Its another masterpiece you have written. It is beautifully sad with a very powerful message. Perfect once again, my dear friend. 5/5

And as you say: Always Believe in Love

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela


*BleedingAngel* ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-29

PERFECT!!! So sad and beautiful at the same time, a true masterpiece, I love it!!! Reading this really touched my heart and it made me think about love and my boyfriend, thank you so much for sharing!!! one of the best poems I have ever read....Great message!!

*Hugs and Love from me, Sabrina*

♥Nobia♥ ( F C ) at 2005-04-29

excellent write...very touching...keep it up take care

*Star~Eyes* ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-29

Excellent job, Sad and very touching piece. Beautifully written, hugs, love, *Ann*

foxyblondfemme ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-29

Wow, wow, wow. Amazing and sad. Very touching, Amit. Great write! Take care,
Car

*Star~Eyes* ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-29

Amit, I don't know. I haven't been on but a few minutes and hadn't got to him on my favorites, but it definitely said his account is suspended. I hope he's O.K. I sure loved his work. If you hear, let me know. Your friend always, hugs, love, *Ann*

katie! ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-29

Wow that was a really sad poem, well done, It was really tear jerking, keep it up I cant wait to see more

~*~Rachael~*~ ( F P C ) at 2005-04-29

Wow...that was based on a true story? Of someone you know personally?? That's extremely sad... love is a very powerful thing, I'm sure you will agree!! Very nicely done though, great job!

Jazmine at 2005-04-29

That wa a beautiful poem it was long but it was worth the time reading it.

Angela ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-29

In answer to the name question?

Thanks for the latest comment Amit, and for all your other comments too. I made a couple of changes to the poem and added Peter's name to the bottom. Thanks for pointing out that I left out his name.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela




ღReticent Soulღ ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-29

Very long, but very good, as always! Great job Amit 5/5

Love,
Heather.

ps.If you couldn't tell from the poem, Shaun & I broke up.

**Stary_nights** ( F C ) at 2005-04-29

very very sad poem amit...but well worth the read. it's very sad, but the message in it is amazing. it really helped me think twice about some doubts i've made. thank you fro this. it's helped me so much. great job!! i really enjoyed it, deserves lnothing les than a 5.
love ya~
*Brittany*

Brittney ( F C D ) at 2005-04-29

this is a really good poem! I think u r an awsome poet, keep up the good work hun! adn always have God in your work.
Love Britt

CaNdY at 2005-04-29

i didn't read the entire thing for it was too long..but im sure it was great..seems sad and touching..feel better

Hillary at 2005-04-29

BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!! THANKS!!!!!

♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥© ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

I Loved It 5.0 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

christina ( C ) at 2005-04-30

wow that was the best love story and poem i hv read for a long time one off my favs one i loved it grt work :D
always smile
peaceeeee

tabita at 2005-04-30

omg i'll never doubt

ells smells ( F ) at 2005-04-30

it is really gd and i think it i realy gd how u come up with these ideas

luv ells smells keep up the work


kassandra at 2005-04-30

Your poem really touched my heart and i mean it. You showed me something that i will never forget and i hope that you and i will get to know each other. My email is skabbeth17@alltel.net please send me something. Id love to know where you get your ideas!


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