Comments - If I am Not Here Tomorrow

AntiSocial16 ( F P C ) at 2005-04-30

wow! this actually brought a small sting of tears to my eyes cuz i started thinking bout my bf and how much he means to me. your an amazing writer. keep it up! and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
AntiSocial16
ps: thanks for the comment on my "I'm In My Tears" poem!

WiShUpOnAsTaR at 2005-04-30

Great poem, thanks for the comment!

жfootstepжcloudж ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

nice write amit....what a beautiful poem!....perfectly written! 5/5



Serenia ( F C ) at 2005-04-30

wow that was a really great poem. i love how you write your poems. keep up the good work. 5/5 thanx for commenting on mine ;)
Serenia

*Star~Eyes* ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

Beautiful Amit, what else is left to say. hugs, love, *Ann*

Angel at 2005-04-30

i love it! can you please read and comment on mine? thanks

**Stary_nights** ( F C ) at 2005-04-30

aww..this is really sad. reminds me of a different poem called something like "if tomorrow never comes" or something like that...they both make me cry:(!! they're sad, but yet happy. anyway, excellent job!! keep it up~
love ya~
*Brittany*

♥Nobia♥ ( F C ) at 2005-04-30

wonderful write...very touching...ure getting better and better!!!keep it up! 5 for sure!!! see ya take care...

Dark Savior ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

Very well done, i liked the way you presented it, showed how things made you closer. What you liked about love and so forth (the flights)

I really liked this poem Amit, i think it is one of the better ones i have read on here.

Signed,
Dark Savior.

Five/Five

P.S. Thank you for your comment on my poem, i am glad to see that i got a comment so quick and such a nice response to my poem. I am glad to see that someone is taking notice of them and they are not just being swept under the rug.

Thank you!

♥♥Christina♥♥ ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

Aww that was such a sweet poem! loved it 5.0

ShadowedPhoenix ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

Wow that was sooo beautiful but so simple in a sense, you took a basic scenario and turned it into one of the best, most moving and most beautiful poem i've read in ages!

Loved it5*


p.s thanks for your comment it really means alot!

Angela ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

Amit, this was absolutly beautiful *wiping tears* and so very well written. All your poems are straight from the heart. Thats only one of the things I love about you and your work. Once again its another masterpiece for you. 5/5

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela


Elaine Becker at 2005-04-30

awww, that's so sweet of u! i luved the poem. 5/5!

Insane Inside And Out ( F C ) at 2005-04-30

It's such a sweet poem. Keep up the writing.

©-Katherine ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

Hey this is an awesome poem!! you have so much talent!! thanks for commenting on my poem!! its means a lot to me!! awesome job *5

xX-Katherine-Xx

ღ.:Krissy:.ღ ( F C D ) at 2005-04-30

Wow! That was a beautiful Amit! Even though I'm only 12, that poem in a way made me think of the person I love. It really means a lot that you commented. He really does mean the world to me, but some people just don't understand that. I can really tell you love Nidhi. I wish you both happiness. Beautiful write Amit! (",)

~Krissy

Kristen ( F P C ) at 2005-04-30

i love this poem, its a great concept and beautifully written..gave me the chills even..great job :)

ღReticent Soulღ ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

Aww, one of your best yet! =) Great job!

Love,
Heather

*BleedingAngel* ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

Beautiful as always Amit, it brought tears to my eyes!!! You are such an amazing writer and your poems are so straight from your heart, I can really feel that when I read your poems!!!

Hugs n' love Sabrina

Lauren Lee ( F P ) at 2005-04-30

beautiful! good job 5/5


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