Gracie Jo ( F C D )
at 2005-05-04
Oh my word, you have me crying right now. This was written with such emotion and passion! Great job! Keep it up! :-]
Courtney Lynn ( C D )
at 2005-05-04
WOW!!! that is all I can say.... I am SPEECHLESS!!!
Great job!!
lisa x) ( F P C D )
at 2005-05-04
such a sad yet beutiful poem.....your definitly my fav list if not my fav altogether!! once again truly spectacular poem..prue brillent...x) *lisa*
Ashley Todd ( F C )
at 2005-05-04
oh wow. . .you are such a great writer that brought tears to my eyes. . .you are very talented and it will get you somewhere. . . great poem. . i really liked it. . if you get a chance check out my 2 favorite poems. . .what i could do with you . . .and. . i wish i was a kid again. . .be sure to comment on them it would really mean alot.
Tina ( F P C D )
at 2005-05-05
Hey, this really is a beautiful poem. It's so sad. 5/5
~ Tina
Corrie ( C D )
at 2005-05-05
OMG! thats so sad! wow, it was really good... *KISSES*~Corrie
jennifer ( F P C D )
at 2005-05-05
Wow this poem touched me to the core.. it is so beautiful yet sad... I adored it although tears fell from my eyes.. your a a great writer... 5555
Whittney L. ( F P C )
at 2005-05-05
This is a great poem, keep wrighting
xoxo~whittney
Brittney ( F C D )
at 2005-05-05
WOW!!!!!!! that is awsome but so sad! I hope this really didnt happen to you and if so i am sorry. this is a really good poem you didnt force the rhyme it flowed together nicely. great job. keep up the good work. Always believe in love and trust in God!!!!!!!!!!!
-Britt
Medhia
at 2005-05-05
awww,omg that's such a sad poem!:'(
crystal ( F C D )
at 2005-05-05
Wow this is the best poem I've ever read!!!
savannah ( F )
at 2005-05-05
this is realy really really good, sad but good i love it keep it up you are so good at this poetry i would enter a poetry contest if i was you
Chelsie
at 2005-05-05
That is so sad! Is it a true story? I think you're an awesome writer!!!
Jenn
at 2005-05-05
Cute and i hope that that didnt reallyt happen to you.
Freak ( F C D )
at 2005-05-05
way to make a person tear up. thats so fricken sad and expertly written. keep it up. i enjoy reading your stuff.
~Freak~
vanessa
at 2005-05-05
hey i love al your poems "a kissin da rain" but dis one is so0o sad is it true if it is is it about the same gurl anywayz if u hav time to awanser my questiona email me at gretell@bellsouth.net g2g bye
christina ( C )
at 2005-05-06
wow that was awsome ...... i dont know wat to say after readin this .... just WOW
grt work
peaceeee
Jocelyn
at 2005-05-06
awww...your poem was sad but its amazing!...your gonna do well in life with poetry
Leanne
at 2005-05-06
that is so sad brought a tear to my eye
joe
at 2005-05-06
gotta say thats prolly the best one i've read so far(im new) very touching and even got me feeling sad and that says something lol n1 dude
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