Ann Marie ( F C D )
very very nicely written. This is a hard transition in a relationship... especially if one of the pair isn't feeling more! You did a great job!
i love all ur poems there awesome!
its funny you wrote this, my names leanne too and i feel exactly the same about a friend of mine
Laura Ashley ( F P C D )
I love this poem! I can really relate to it and I like the way you ryme. =]
grace ( F C )
Sweeeett.hope you two will together(=
I LOVED UR POEM KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB
xo kisses xo ( F P C D )
This is an amazing poem.
i know a lot of people who feel this way.
xo kisses xo
SilentLove ( F P D )
Kyaahh!!.wat a nice poem!^_^
it makes me remember my preciouse friend,
i've fallen for him for 10yrs..T_T
but its ok now cuz wer still friend.
and i'm ok for that.=)
just be w/ him...
Aryaan ( C )
Theme is very good and interesting. i wouldn't say you've written it badly but i think it could have been better. vocab could have been stronger. just my thought... as a whole it's a nice one... good to read... keep writing.
Great use of words, reminded me of what i wrote in the past... 2 years i've felt that way with that girl, then i was rejected before i even confessed. Before she left i gave her a compiled book of all my poems that i wrote for her, which was at that time all i had... (and deleted the soft copy, so only she had it, sorry guys/girls) whatever i post are the new ones. Back to topic, great work and keep the pen moving.
I love this poem!
jane ( D )
I can relate to this poem.. its really great.. well written.. 5/5
Wat an awesome poem!!!!!
I Feel the same way bout dis guy The excact way! i dunno wat i should do tell him i like him or keep it locked up!?
All I can say is, this poem is pure magic. It really is beautiful.
Just That Girl ( F P C )
That's all what i could think of while reading it, it seriously left me speachless.
FaithHopeNLove ( F C )
I think its safe to say that almost everyone has felt this way. In a few short stanza's you caught one of lifes most questioned troubles. Its elequently written and evokes a real sense of compassion and understanding. Great job! 5/5!
Keep up the good work :P
As someone who has been in the same position, I can only wish you the best of luck.
I hope you receive an answer from this person soon.
YASMINE T ( F )
REALLY SWEET POEM 10/10 X
msluckyone ( C )