Comments - To My Unborn Child...

Crystal ( F P C ) at 2005-07-13

aww. that is so sweet. amazing poem. is true? do you really have a son on the way? if so congratulations. great job at writing this poem. plz check out mine if you can one of them is called every other day. thanks..awesome job!! 7/5

undying blusher ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-13

That is so wonderful...the poem has excellent rhyme and flow...that was just lovely....heartfelt....

xxx

§аяан кна׀їға ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-14

Awww...that was an excellent poem, congratulations if this is true..I know your baby will always bring you happiness. Take care xxx

Bethanie John at 2005-07-14

this is such a beautiful poem you're going to be a great dad

Crystal ( F P C ) at 2005-07-14

ok matthew i just had to ask..it is still an amazing poem though..lol..

*fading fantasy* at 2005-07-14

that is a great poem. that is so sweet that you are having a baby boy. I love the way the poem flows...he is a lucky little boy.

Try not to lose your temper; it’s really no big deal
But my son if you must fight, do it for something real

I love that part. 5/5 I hope you get alot of chances to write more. I love your poems.
caitlyn

Randi at 2005-07-14

That was beautiful. I wish I could put my feelings into words for my unborn child, but I cant. You're amazing for being someone who can. Im sure you will make a wonderful father...

Teresa at 2005-07-14

this is a great poem for i am expecting myself so i know how you feel, the father doesnt know yet but i hope he turns like you because you sound like a great, sweet, loving father and husband.

gdluvr11 at 2005-07-14

one word while going throught my mind reading this :awesome!! ur a good writer and ur going 2 be the perfect father, i dont kno my dad but im glad that your son will always have a father to look up 2

Liz at 2005-07-14

omgosh i absolutely loved it!!absolutely NOTHING to critisize about.. i am truely happy for your son and i know hes got a great dad!! ~liz

natasha at 2005-07-14

wow....thats was absolutely fat (good) lol can i ask u a question coz i dont no my dad .......er will u b my dad plz coz if u read sum of my poems u will understand how i feel bout fathers u u and a roll model 4 all me 2 look up 2
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx tazza
good luck in the future

Becky ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-14

Hey, great poem, keep it up! xxx 5/5

Jenna at 2005-07-14

That was such a beautful poem. I loved it. Please read my poems.

-Jenna

ღ.:Krissy:.ღ ( F C D ) at 2005-07-14

Awww, that was so sweet! It was amazingly written. It had great flow. Amazing job!

~Krissy

Chenelle at 2005-07-14

That is the sweetest poemI have everread

Sabrina Murphy ( F ) at 2005-07-14

WOW this is wonderful. Your the sweetest guy ever, and i can tell this by how you write. Again your wonderful, keep up the good work, and your son is lucky to have a daddy like you!

makenzie at 2005-07-14

Awww that was sooo good!! Congratulations!!

Alissa ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-14

I want you to be the father of my baby :-( lol!! omg this is the best poem I have EVER read its so sweet...and so good. Congrats...and awesome job and oh shot I just fell in love with you! lol

Mel ( P ) at 2005-07-14

That was heart warming.. truely beautiful.. well done here.. great job.. your a loving father to the max :D
x mel x

amanda at 2005-07-14

great loved it



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