Comments

BrokenMisery ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-23

A very interesting poem style, great idea, good words, a very good idea! Keep experimenting ;)

Lo5t s0ul at 2005-07-23

lol - i think the poem's good, but i think it rocks cos it's a different style - and i like that you've explored other cultures -not just every day poetry

emma x

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-23

Another great one steve!!!

bob shank ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-22

Bout as perfect as one can be done, maybe I should move to Japan so I can better perfect my own writing of these styles and formats, I simply love their genre of poetry...you my man are amazing

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-23

Just Exquisite!!! Very nice Steve!!!

Gesselle Valle ( F C D ) at 2005-12-11

5/5 Great one...can't believe I didn't read this one before...can't wait for more! Take care my dear friend.