Comments - Last Night I Had A Dream

**mysterio~lover** ( C ) at 2005-08-12

Great poem! That dream must have been awsome!lol!Keep up the good work!
Brittney
aka**mysterio~lover**

MJ at 2005-08-13

Good Job. A lot better than my poems.

dandy ( F P C ) at 2005-08-14

Aww, this poem is really sweet! It's like every girl's dream. Great job and keep writing!

~dandy~

ceci Mathieu at 2005-08-14

Damn for your first poem it is very beautiful don't stop writing and keep up the good work also is this a fiction poem or is it real?

Malory at 2005-08-14

Ah...the perfect dream! And poem! Nicely done...5.
~Never Give Up


Amber at 2005-08-14

love it. keep submitting!

dOrK7AgOnY ( F ) at 2005-08-14

oh wow!
your really good...I guess its suppose to be happy right?..But it made me almost cried....Seriousely!..you did an awesome job..and your first poem on here only...very awesome^^


joana at 2005-08-14

wow this poem is soooo cute

kelly vang at 2005-08-14

you have a nice poem...you also have sweet words i never heard before in hea too...

kelly vang at 2005-08-14

you have a nice poem...you also have sweet words i never heard before in hea too...

Riot at 2005-08-14

OK...WOW!! That poem was definitely one of the best i've ever read. It moved me so much and i just made my heart skip beats. It's brilliant. You should be very proud. It has...no flaws.

Kacey ( F ) at 2005-08-14

i loved it. it reminds me of me and my boyfriend. that was great keep writing


ThugPoet ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-14

Wow Brooke .. this poem had me captivated with the first syllable of the title hehee .. i really enjoyed it .. really .. infact .. this poem has inspired me to write my own .. i've never really written nething to sensual .. so if u wud do me a favour and check the new poem i write .. dont worry i'll give u ur props . .hehe arite .. thanks again for checkin me out .. umm .. keep writing beautiful poetry .. inspiring yung kids like me to be better .. :D:D =) bye

Danny at 2005-08-14

truely beautiful. great poem for a first post. please keep on writing and giving more.

Brittany at 2005-08-14

da** that was relli good!

kelsey ( C ) at 2005-08-14

hey. that was really good. i loved it. keep it up. you write really well. 5/5

kelsey
xoxoxo

rsdce at 2005-08-14

splendid!!!!!!!!!

~Britty~Nloveღ ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-14

that was really sweet!!! good detail!!!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~

*|ღ|*Christina*|ღ|* ( F P C D ) at 2005-08-14

woah...that was captivating......i;ve had dreams like that lately...well that was a great poem. amazing job im really glad i read it :o) [[5]]

Kelsey at 2005-08-14

Awwww!!! Thats sweet!! I love it! Keep up the good work! Once again I loved it!
Love always- Kelsey


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