~*$ad**Pr!nce$$*~ ( F C D )
Omg.. that is such a great poem! i love it!! well done!! keep up the good work.. bec x x
That was great. I got watery eyed when I read that. I cant wait to read more of your poem.
Keep it up.
I really liked it, it was dark and fun at the same time, thanks for you comment for me, keep up you are really talented for someone of 15
elizabeth ( F P C D )
Great rhythm and flow, and you're right its very sad. The story seemed to have a bitter-sweet texture about it, like they wasted so much time that they could have been together because they were undecided.
skyfox ( F P C )
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem had it all. My heart ran the gammut of feelings as I read. You are a very good writer. I have enjoyed reading your work. (Sometimes through teary eyes though)
*~Jayma100%lovehurts ( F P C )
This poem is so beautiful and sad tears came down my eyes!!!!!!!!!!
Emma ( F P C )
Aww!! that is so sad!!! so good though you have such talent!
holly ( F C )
That is so sad but very well written i give it 5/5
Aww this is a real sweet poem, but i hope it isnt true
yuniardi ( C D )
Hm... i can relate to this poem so much.. 5/5 for sure
Trixie ( F P C )
Wonderful poem, just flowed all the way through, actually brought a tear to my eye, so emotional and full of feeling, WELL DONE!!!
take care xx
Ariana ( F P C D )
That's really sad, I like your rhyming flow though they fit nicely. This would be really cool developed into a story.
bRiTbRiT ( C )
I LOVE THIS POEM PERFECT PERFECT LOL your a really good writer
Rajkamal ( P )
Nice poemm. Really sad, but good.
LiL-T ( F P C D )
Thats amazing omg well do 10/5 if i could giv it its so gd omg i dunno what to say just amazing truly amazing
Wow!!! thanks for making me cry...but it was worth it. that was a truely amazing poem. WOW!!! is all i can really say.
hopeless08 ( C )
This poem is really sad, but really great. Good job.
RainbowSlider ( F P C D )
The perfect poem.
Ali ( F P C )
Aww thats so sad
ღ•Emmy•ღ ( F P C )
Aww. That was awesome.