Comments - You'll Find Someone Else

~*$ad**Pr!nce$$*~ ( F C D ) at 2005-10-18

Omg.. that is such a great poem! i love it!! well done!! keep up the good work.. bec x x

Neca at 2005-10-18

That was great. I got watery eyed when I read that. I cant wait to read more of your poem.
Keep it up.
Neca

james nixon at 2005-10-24

I really liked it, it was dark and fun at the same time, thanks for you comment for me, keep up you are really talented for someone of 15

elizabeth ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-24

Great rhythm and flow, and you're right its very sad. The story seemed to have a bitter-sweet texture about it, like they wasted so much time that they could have been together because they were undecided.

Good Writing!
beth

skyfox ( F P C ) at 2005-10-28

BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!! This poem had it all. My heart ran the gammut of feelings as I read. You are a very good writer. I have enjoyed reading your work. (Sometimes through teary eyes though)

*~Jayma100%lovehurts ( F P C ) at 2005-10-29

This poem is so beautiful and sad tears came down my eyes!!!!!!!!!!

Emma ( F P C ) at 2005-10-30

Aww!! that is so sad!!! so good though you have such talent!

holly ( F C ) at 2005-11-03

That is so sad but very well written i give it 5/5
take care

holly

Vanessa at 2005-11-04

Aww this is a real sweet poem, but i hope it isnt true

yuniardi ( C D ) at 2005-11-05

Hm... i can relate to this poem so much.. 5/5 for sure

Trixie ( F P C ) at 2005-11-08

Wonderful poem, just flowed all the way through, actually brought a tear to my eye, so emotional and full of feeling, WELL DONE!!!
take care xx

Ariana ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-08

That's really sad, I like your rhyming flow though they fit nicely. This would be really cool developed into a story.

bRiTbRiT ( C ) at 2005-11-12

I LOVE THIS POEM PERFECT PERFECT LOL your a really good writer

Rajkamal ( P ) at 2005-11-12

Nice poemm. Really sad, but good.

LiL-T ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-13

Thats amazing omg well do 10/5 if i could giv it its so gd omg i dunno what to say just amazing truly amazing

Jared at 2005-11-15

Wow!!! thanks for making me cry...but it was worth it. that was a truely amazing poem. WOW!!! is all i can really say.

hopeless08 ( C ) at 2005-11-18

This poem is really sad, but really great. Good job.

RainbowSlider ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-20

The perfect poem.

Ali ( F P C ) at 2005-11-22

Aww thats so sad

ღ•Emmy•ღ ( F P C ) at 2005-11-23

Aww. That was awesome.
Really touching