Dumpstead ( C D )
at 2005-12-06
Nice phrasing.
I read through your profile and read some of your poems.
All I have to say is taht you have written more poems in a year than I have in my life and they are good too.
ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ ( F P C D )
at 2005-12-06
I love this poem and i understand what u mean when u say everyword in this poem...keep up the great work and never change...5/5
Sammie ( F P C D )
at 2005-12-06
Umm this was a pretty good poem... well written... the ryming was a lil rough but over all it was pretty good.. keep it up
sammie
Angel_@_Heart ( C D )
at 2005-12-07
Amazingly beautiful !!
xxx
Barbara ( P C )
at 2005-12-07
That was really beautiful!!! I'm curious to what exactly it was about!! But it was very touching and emotional!! Great job!!! Keep writing!!
Nannoush ( F C D )
at 2005-12-10
Hey.. gr8 job wit this poem.. nice rhyme, and gr8 words.. v deep.. and i liked ur flow.. it was reli heart-felt.. and almost made me cry.. i gez u reli loved the guy (if it was true)..
i so love ur last stanza
keep it up
NannO
~*ForbiddenEyes*~ ( F P C D )
at 2006-01-14
I like this style better then the poems with the short lines. Great job
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