Comments - The Ocean...

Lindsey at 2005-12-08

Cute, I love it. It's so I dunno a word for it. It's good though. It's like it has so much meaning in such little fragments. Great poem.



sarah ( P ) at 2005-12-08

Thanx for all votes
this poem means alot to me
leave a comment if you like it
sarah x X x

//Distorted Pain\ ( F ) at 2005-12-08

Wow, that was great. I loved the way you expressed the poem and used the perfect words to paint a visual in my mind. Keep it up.

-Chelsea

Tim Bradshaw ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-14

Hey again loved this one as well. you know how to keep people interested.

*^*living a dream*^* ( F P ) at 2005-12-28

Reali good poem. i love the way you've compared love to this, love it!!
*^* xxx *^*

judith howard at 2006-02-18

It was good i loved it keep writing more

kallie ( F P C ) at 2006-03-13

Wow!! i love the ending!! its such a surprise!!! its amazing!! great job!!! keep it up!! comment back if you would!!

Rachel Barnett ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-21

Beautifully penned

CherokeeW at 2007-04-20

Well... to tell the truth it is very detailed, however, it is so detailed that even the most intelligent person would have trouble understanding this poem. Good try ^.^