Lindsey
at 2005-12-08
Cute, I love it. It's so I dunno a word for it. It's good though. It's like it has so much meaning in such little fragments. Great poem.
sarah ( P )
at 2005-12-08
Thanx for all votes
this poem means alot to me
leave a comment if you like it
sarah x X x
//Distorted Pain\ ( F )
at 2005-12-08
Wow, that was great. I loved the way you expressed the poem and used the perfect words to paint a visual in my mind. Keep it up.
-Chelsea
Tim Bradshaw ( F P C D )
at 2005-12-14
Hey again loved this one as well. you know how to keep people interested.
*^*living a dream*^* ( F P )
at 2005-12-28
Reali good poem. i love the way you've compared love to this, love it!!
*^* xxx *^*
judith howard
at 2006-02-18
It was good i loved it keep writing more
kallie ( F P C )
at 2006-03-12
Wow!! i love the ending!! its such a surprise!!! its amazing!! great job!!! keep it up!! comment back if you would!!
Rachel Barnett ( F P C D )
at 2006-12-20
Beautifully penned
CherokeeW
at 2007-04-20
Well... to tell the truth it is very detailed, however, it is so detailed that even the most intelligent person would have trouble understanding this poem. Good try ^.^
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