aLoVeLiFeHuRtS(Jayma) ( F P C )
I loved it it was great you are a great writer keep up the good work!!!!!
In lov4... ( F C )
This is great! keep writing!
ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ ( F P C D )
Oh my god this poem is amazing and i can feel the emotion behind it...i love all of ur work and i know that u know that...well 5/5 keep up the great work....5/5
Emma ( F P C )
Wow this is so good! i like it a lot...its very sad. it makes you think bout the terrible things that can happen becasue of one mistake. great as usual!
>torn apart ( F P C D )
Omg had me in tears!:( reminds me of those TAC ads..
Great poem hun, u have talent thats for sure xoxo
Rican Chemistry ( F P C D )
Crazyyyyyyyy poem. I know this girl, that was driving her boyfriend to school on his birthday and she crashed and he died. She blames herself all the time...but he died for not wearing his seatbelt. Life can be so cruel.
Ben ( F P )
I am impressed, you defintly have some great talent and this poem sent a very strong message! Well done =)
Shane ( F P )
An example of the harmful effects of drunk driving.
A poem with a lesson?
Who can complain?
♥I`ve Got My Fingers Crossed&h ( F P C D )
Amazing!! I wanted to cry! You write soo well...is this a true story? I hope not! Keep it up!
…°¤•*d0яα ( F C )
0mg what a t0uching pice. w0w that was very well written!!!!! 0mg.. g0od j0b 0n it darl!! very well written!!
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra
Nicole Jacobsen ( F P )
OH MY GOD.This poem is like....you read it and don't expect that at the end. It's so sad. But I know alot of people that've been in these situations. Love it. I gave it a *5*.
Ðå®ĸ Ŵii§ħĖ§ & Ð®ëĀ ( F P C )
WoW.. that was an excellent poem i so didnt expect that that it was really really good!!!!... anyway you have a talent thats for sure.. check some of my poems out.XoX Nat XoX
Your poem was WONDERFUL!!keep up the good work!!5!!
drama chick ( F P C D )
Wow, that was a winderful poem. 5'5
~..Luanne..~ ( F P C D )
Such a sad piece .... but over the holidays it will hopefully carry a strong message to many ...
Great write , packs a powerful punch ....
Kimeko Lancaster ( C )
Omg!! this poem was amazing. Great job 5/5
Excellent! i love this poem!
OMG dis poem was soooo sad..i read sumden similar 2 dis kinda situation..but it wuz si sad it almost mad me cry..keep up da gud work
Omg wow this is so heart breakin it is great it shows us about the wrong when sum1 wanted to do the right i dont know what i would do if i had killed the love of my life
dancer_chick ( F )
Wow! That was a really great poem. I am glad you wrote that. That happened to my friend not to long ago. And is a very serious thing. Keep up the good work, and keep writing poems.