Comments

Phillip ( F P C ) at 2006-02-10

Hey this one is cool and simple. every line is smooth, never going out of the flow of the poem. you know how to write.
thank you for commenting in mine. now i have someone to read up on.... woohoo!;)

Gummie Bear at 2006-02-28

This was VERY good...

keep up tha good work


xoxoxo

Kevin ( D ) at 2006-03-01

I really liked it and i know how u feel loving someone 100%

Cody ( F P C D ) at 2006-03-13

Hey I love this poem, I don't really have anyone like that (it's 7:20A.M. and I'll be on for the next 40 mins)

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