-*N3mA*- ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-02
Well, I gave it 4/5 not bcuz its bad, just an opinion :)
but hey I loved the ending it was lovely
keep it up and good luck ;)
Simon Hayes ( F C D )
at 2006-02-02
Beautiful Steve! Loving and caring... A true love without the "facade". Beautiful!
kylead ( P C )
at 2006-02-02
Not one for this type of poetry but ya it was good nice flow and made sense all the way through 4/5 here and if you get the chance rate and comment on my poem (phoenix) please
¡Britt! ( F C D )
at 2006-02-02
This absolutely took my breath away. You have such a sweet way of writing your love poems. I loved the very first two lines
"Looking through the photographs,
of ten thousand memories ago;"
I know how that feels...isn't love just amazing?
Danielle
at 2006-02-09
I loved this poem! It had so much emotion it was perfect! I loved it!!
shyann ( F P C )
at 2006-02-09
Awww thiz poemz so beautiful....now thatz wat i call tru love well keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5
Lost Soul 691 ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-26
Makes me want to get out the photo albums ... and make a night of it! Very well done, full of emotion.
Tammy ( F P C D )
at 2006-04-29
Awesome Steven! What a lucky lady.
Beautiful dedication of love.
Take care!
FELTON PHILLIPS ( P C )
at 2006-05-03
Very emotional poem, I felt it.
Good Job!
Undead ( F C D )
at 2006-05-15
You have a magnificent flow in your poems. Very easy to read. I loved this one.
The theme of growing old together, well that chokes me up when I think of my grandparents.
When grandpa passed away, my granny just stood there, looked at him, and I could have sworn, she smiled a bit.
She must have been thinking something like this poem. She loved him so much and misses him a lot, and like in your poem, looks at the pictures and remembers.
Thank you Mr. Bee
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2007-05-18
What a beautiful story of love. Excellent imagery. Superbly written.
Gracefully we journey and
together we will grow old, I would
not want it any other way. Loving
you always even till the day I have to go.
This stanza touched me so deeply.
Take care Cindy
saungthinzar ( F P C )
at 2007-10-23
I m growing too but i m not going to die yet because i m still very young.
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