Comments

Natosha ( F P C ) at 2006-02-04

Nice poem and thanks for commenting on mine. It was really nice. And dont quit you are good. And I am glad that it made you think, so now you know how I feel when I read yours.

Nymphetamine ( F ) at 2006-09-07

Beautiful poem. So simple and yet so sweet at the same time. Good use of rhyming, it flowed well.
xxx

catherine ( C D ) at 2006-09-15

You made me cry. That is pure beauty and really hits to home. You are a wonderful poet.

chelsa at 2007-03-05

This is so wonderful,s uch talent. If you did not show this to her, you most definitely should. There are some other ones youwrote about a girl too? Wow, if someone wrtoe me something like this, I'd be blown away. I'm sure she'll love // she loved it. I did ! and I think everyone else did as well. nice work, keep writing! :D

Anthony smith ( F ) at 2007-05-23

I love this poem. I feel the same way about this girl that I like. i feel where you're coming from. I hope you can relate to my poem " Ms. Nelson Has No Idea". please leave a comment.

Ivy Stockill ( P ) at 2007-05-28

Wow, beautiful. I loved it.

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De Vega at 2008-12-30

WOW... DUDe, ur words really flows nicely

ateRachie ( P ) at 2009-01-02

I think those words were really honest. they flowed and showed real emotion. keep it up! loved it

BraidhairCutie ( C ) at 2009-10-22

LOVED IT!...VERY BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET!..