Bill Turner ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-06
Steve, this poem rocks! Great job!
Illuminati ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-06
Its a beauti!
¡Britt! ( F C D )
at 2006-02-06
This is beautifully complicated :)
I love the message of the poem, and I love how its in 3 different styles. Looks complicated, but you've inspired me to try :)
Kim ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-06
This poem is awesome! Love the way you played with the different styles, I may have to go try now. lol, again wonderful poem!
Kim ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-06
This poem is awesome! Love the way you played with the different styles, I may have to go try now. lol, again wonderful poem!
Simon Hayes ( F C D )
at 2006-02-06
WOAH! This is magnificent... Wonderful poem, so wonderfully written in such a fantastic style!!!!!
shobhana kumar ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-06
This is awesome! not just the flow, but the way you've experimented with different styles!
you never cease to amaze me!!!!!
shobhana
Robert Gardiner ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-08
Exquisite love, exquisite write, wonderful Steven, just superb!!!
Angelina Taylor® ( F P C D )
at 2006-02-08
Wow.. your talent is immense, my friend! I know I haven't commented in a while - but that will change :P I loved this piece. The words captured me from the very beginning. The reader can clearly feel the emotion embedded within the poem.. I loved it.
Take care,
Taylor``
Saffire Dragon ( C )
at 2006-02-09
Wow! The feeling in this poem draws no other word to my lips!
Chris Harding ( P C )
at 2006-02-11
You're full of inspiring ideas aren't you? :p Another really well thought out poem mate, beautifully crafted with a nice use of language. I bet Hong Kongs full of inspiration though eh? Keep up the good work!
Liesl
at 2006-02-12
Awwww.... that makes me want to hug you.
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